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My Heart isn't Whole if You Leave by Raybuggybug My Heart isn't Whole if You Leave by Raybuggybug
More ulquihime |D I tried to make realistic hair. How'd I do?

I wonder though,
Does anyone remember when I made Ulquihime art way back when?

Edit: the heart always bugged me before with how shiney if was. I changed its appearance.
:iconjemgirl:
I understand what you were trying to do, but I'm not sure if the heart is right.

I can see the light and hope and love on her side and how she is leaving him along, and in dark and with the broken part of his heart, but I kinda feel like the heart should be flipped.

That was my first impression, but the more I look at it, I think it's good the way it is.

Her hair carries the light very well. He's melting into the dark quite evenly despite his white skin. :)

Now I'm back to the heart again. I see the same progress and divide happening there too. Which helps convey what is really going on here. So it's one of the key parts of this drawing. But I feel like it could be a bit more refined around the edges.

Over all, it's very good piece. Thanks for sharing. :)
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ShadowDoctrine Featured By Owner May 31, 2016  Hobbyist Photographer
Nicely done
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Raybuggybug Featured By Owner May 31, 2016  Hobbyist Artist
Thank you very much ^u^
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ShadowDoctrine Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2016  Hobbyist Photographer
You are most welcome ladybug F R E E S T U F F by AStoKo  
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