My Heart isn't Whole if You Leave

I understand what you were trying to do, but I'm not sure if the heart is right.

I can see the light and hope and love on her side and how she is leaving him along, and in dark and with the broken part of his heart, but I kinda feel like the heart should be flipped.

That was my first impression, but the more I look at it, I think it's good the way it is.

Her hair carries the light very well. He's melting into the dark quite evenly despite his white skin. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/>

Now I'm back to the heart again. I see the same progress and divide happening there too. Which helps convey what is really going on here. So it's one of the key parts of this drawing. But I feel like it could be a bit more refined around the edges.

Over all, it's very good piece. Thanks for sharing. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/>